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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2012-10-24 10:06 PM


Here I've fallen on myself
for the last time I have felt
the worst has yet to come
the pain is what I have done
Do not expect me to regret
don't look to me for tears
you cannot share in this expense
of how it carries me to faith
Pass the clock and sing the time
its all unwinding now
forgive the sun to shine
its coming all apart
I am not forth right in this
I am not what you can see
all this world came apart
as I find the wind for me

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Ethern
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 150
on a plane
1 posted 2012-11-12 07:17 PM


shame this didn't get more attention. it's a profound write
Victoria
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2 posted 2012-11-12 09:05 PM


Nicely done Michael. Enjoyed your words.

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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