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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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The sign said "Don't feed the birds", don't tap on the glass, don't give me your hand it'll only make it worse. You hold me close when you call me crazy.. You like to make my mind up, you caught me calling your bluff, now you're angry. Might as well take me home in your rusted, worn out hearse, because I'm dead to you, and you're dead to me.. (tell me when it starts to hurt) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Interesting conversation of one. I understand the mindset of solitary conversation, believe me, so all this made perfect sense to me. I especially liked the "rusted, worn out hearse" effect. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
whewwwwwwwwwwww... and helllllllloooo gawgeous. I'm so thrilled to see you here again--I don't even mind ducking the back of your hand. Sizzling intensity. Love you much, and kiss the little goddess for me, k? love, *smile* (Penny Lane...a.k.a. serenity)  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ouch, Kaoru! I am sorry to hear it. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine emotional writing...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
haven't read you in a long time ... now, as then, enjoy reading your words... j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
The first word that came to my mind was awful...The poem was great. I loved it! The emotional reaction was very strong. Good job! lori  |
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