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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-10-23 07:04 AM


     


she said she had . . .
Tragic News . . . she went on to say . . .

It was inevitable, and nobody's fault.
Goodbye, God bless and be well.


if she thought I would be devastated
she thought wrong
everything we'd ever had
left us about six months ago
I've been hanging on
when I should've been hanging out

now, with a clear head
one who doesn't play the "fault" game
I'm ready and well equipped
for life's next full contact experience

©October 22, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-23-2012 08:11 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-10-23 11:53 AM


Thanks, Karilea . . .

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r v wooo
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3 posted 2012-10-23 02:34 PM


Good hunting...
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-10-23 02:38 PM


Haha! Thanks, r v . . .

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Spiros Zafiris
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5 posted 2012-10-24 02:47 AM


..Perseverance..when i pray, i mention
a number of Kind Forces (Patience, Truth,
Love..and others)..but Perseverance, i
mention twice..Jerry be strong--hey, that
would make a good title for a rock&roll tune..>>spiros
~~

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-10-24 10:06 AM


Yes indeed, Spiros, it would make a good title for a rock & roll tune. Thanks for stopping by and for the concern.

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