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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Autumn's spread across the ground while breezes flit each leaf around amber, green and orange abide and me, I sit cozily inside VAS Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sounds like a cozy setup to me. What's that in your hand? Hot buttered rum, but of course . . . ah . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I wish! In comparison,it was boring, but hot coffee. Thanks for rdg and commenting. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
Vas, short but sweet and to the point...a verbal "snapshot". Let me see...how does the saying go... a picture is worth a thousand words. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Pretty autumn poem  A |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Oh, please! Get out and shuffle those leaves around! They are such ephemeral fun! Good to "see you" again Virginia, it has been such a long time . . . I thought you were among the lost. Hope you are well and comfortable. You have given me a tanka idea . . . |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I am amazingly well after having a surprise triple bypass on April 21. It's been so long since I spent time here, I can't even recall what a "tanka" is. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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