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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-10-20 04:09 AM

She use to close her eyes
under the silent cry of the middle night

Those tears came
from the the shoulders of her skin
that shirtless tank top that bared the winds eye
to shed the heart of a woman's struggle

The night never bared its skin
as it did that night
with its pocket clouds breaking off
onto her tears
down the streams of the rivers cheek
and through a child
that became a woman's soft heart
feeling the tear of a mans deceit.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2012-10-20 01:09 PM

very emotional, i like the perspective of a growing heart, thanks for the splendid poem,
yann

Lady Goodman
Member

since 2012-10-04

Posts 193

2 posted 2012-10-20 11:40 PM

a poignant portrait, indeed.

elpanache
New Member

since 2012-10-24

Posts 3
DELTA STATE, NIGERIA

3 posted 2012-10-25 06:20 PM

Way to go, pip pal... Twas really emotional. Do kip it up...

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2012-10-27 10:02 AM

No worse feeling than deceit. I enjoy all your poems.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-10-27 10:20 AM

enjoyed.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2012-10-27 04:50 PM

Very well done! Plethora of tears, that it is!
lori

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

7 posted 2012-11-05 04:51 PM

Yann-

Good to hear from you. Happy it resonated with you...appreciate the comments. Take care

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

8 posted 2012-11-05 04:52 PM

Lady-

Thank you, kindly. Take care

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

9 posted 2012-11-05 04:52 PM

Elpanache-

I'll try to...thanks for the warm response.

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

10 posted 2012-11-05 04:53 PM

Victoria-

There isn't, is there? I appreciate the love, as always.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

11 posted 2012-11-05 04:53 PM

J-

Thanks for the love. Hope you're well, bud.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

12 posted 2012-11-05 05:08 PM

Lori-

Happy you enjoyed. Hopefully good tears...Take care

Cheers

Tomer

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