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Pweisbrod
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since 2011-10-14
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0 posted 2012-10-17 09:50 PM


intricate and delicate
flower lined,
but full of life
beating mutely
like skin drums filled with water.

thumping quietly in the night
like so many hairy monsters,
only gentle
talons kind and paws soft
misunderstood.

copper tinged
like air,
when the body needs it most
a requirement to live
my love for you.

[This message has been edited by Pweisbrod (10-17-2012 10:27 PM).]

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-10-18 06:42 PM


Beautifully creative, Paul. Good to read you again!

Margherita

Pweisbrod
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2 posted 2012-10-18 11:09 PM


Thanks Margopargo.
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