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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-10-13 07:32 AM

Taking down some things I posted earlier.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-14-2012 09:42 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-10-13 07:59 AM

Jerry, My daughter has a hat that says:

FORGET LOVE I'D RATHER FALL IN CHOCOLATE

I don't know as I'd go that far, but chocolate does run a close second! I enjoyed this very much. You even made me smile with the way you were cracking on that damnable woman that raised you.

Thanks for the smile first thing this morning
lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-10-13 08:28 AM

You are welcome, Lori, thank YOU for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-13-2012 09:00 AM).]

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-10-13 11:33 AM

Enjoying chocolate and your poem, JP.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-10-13 11:38 AM

Heh.Heh. That is good to hear, Ms. E. Thank you much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-10-13 11:49 AM

A truly convincingly cognitive conversation with self. Any change is good... like
breathing, first in then out.
Really enjoyed the look inside, Jerry.

Mississippi Mud Pie!!

Great write, my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-10-13 12:03 PM

Gotta love those Mississippi mud pies, my friend. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem this Saturday morning, J.L.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2012-10-13 01:26 PM

alot of people arent as open and honest about themselves as this.. that takes a degree of courage..

i really enjoyed this Jerry.. great job

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-10-13 01:46 PM

Ah, Richy, I've spent a couple of decades uncovering all my skeletons and shoving them into the world naked, letting the world see them for what they are. As you can see, I haven't quite finished with them yet. Thank you for reading this poem and paying me such nice compliments.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2012-10-13 02:38 PM

Observing a few "good Christians" in action can pretty much turn one off to religion,
Jerry. I think they need some chocolate, myself.

Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-10-13 02:47 PM

You speak the truth, Ida. The Ten Commandments are worthy, I suppose, but even they may need some upgrading. I appreciate your read and comments, my friend.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

11 posted 2012-10-14 07:32 AM

..indeed..! another poem well enjoyed..!

..>>spiros
~~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-10-14 08:06 AM

Thank you, Spiros, for your welcomed comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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