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Open Poetry #48

Into the night

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2012-10-11 05:05 PM

The sky seeped into a navy blue
with soft highlights
from a setting sun. The wind clings to
me with cold hands as
leaves like a blazing fire fell
gently as snow. Between smoky clouds
the moon glows like a full blown
flower bathing in the sun,
within
it's golden rays. Stars climb
the sky in search of dreams,
a present to give to
a wishful child by
heart. To those who
cast their eyes to a
never ending sky. Lets dream
again

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-12 06:35 AM

Dreams. Without them we perish. You gave a bountiful supply of descriptive line within the confines of this poem, ken . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2012-10-12 09:49 AM

Very well written, Ken.
Enjoyed your vision "Into the night"

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-10-13 06:08 PM

Fine writing...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2012-10-15 05:20 AM

What a beautiful poem, Ken. Glad I found it.
Ida

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-10-16 01:22 PM

enjoyed and agree with jerry's comments my friend.

j.

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