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Open Poetry #48

across the naked floor

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-10-11 01:40 AM

Her soft, linen lips
were a square inch away
from the shallow, posh land
that shied itself away from
from the sunrise

Cavalier,
she walked around her apartment
with the crass of her legs
perched up upon her coffee table

Her legs so long
the shadows below them
reached the front door

She read her lips a story
of how the gust of wind
seemed to carry through
her loft like a small gust
that teetered on the edge

She had those eyes
that had a pleasant scent
with their stare that faded
for the channels wept
under the French rails
of the cities broken heart

A cities listless soul
became apart of
her quiet stroll

niteismyday
Junior Member

since 2012-06-19

Posts 35

1 posted 2012-10-11 03:35 AM

This is a very nice little poem you have written. It was very enjoyable to read. Great work!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2012-10-14 05:21 PM

Nite-

Appreciate the kind words...happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-10-15 02:25 PM

A pleasure to read...when I read History books that are well written its like I'm almost there, this gives me those feelings...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2012-10-20 04:07 AM

James-

Appreciate the strong comments..means a lot. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

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