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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Time Passages the evening sun vanishes over rooftops and hills___ moon on a thousand doorsteps lovely stranger fading with the mist___ loneliness midnight screams a distant door slams___ helplessness an unseen candle wall-shadow smoke___ which is more real the morning star rises___ wildflowers --- b. e. adams (10/10/2012) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
A slice of life which is never perfect, but your rendition of it certainly is, Bruce. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
agree with jerry, my friend...very nice j. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, Bruce. Besides the exquisite imagery, I particularly enjoyed the enigmatic narrative. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to each of you for your comments on this Impressionistic 'Zenesque' penning! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
a bit different style for you, Bruce, but well done as always. Ida |
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