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JL
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0 posted 2012-10-10 06:27 AM


Pages of Blue


I see pages of blue, words written so true

I see them there, for me and for you,

And I think to myself, what a wonderful place.

I see friends, and poets, and warm loving smiles,

The bright and the witty, and the silly ones too,

And I think to myself, what a wonderful place

Three colors of blue, so pretty with the shades of whites

Are also in my thoughts when I am thinking of you

I see friends writing friends, warm words in reply,

They're really saying, “I love you."

I read beautiful poems, I just want you to know

I will learn more than I can ever hope to say,

And I think to myself, what a wonderful place

Yes I think to myself, what a wonderful place.
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Thanks PIP!

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To the tune:
“What A Wonderful World”
By George David Weiss and Bob Thiele
Performed by Louis Armstrong
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Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

© Copyright 2012 JL - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-10-10 06:30 AM


Nicely done, JL, and you speak eloquently for most of us.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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2 posted 2012-10-10 06:32 AM


Thanks JP, but did you sing along??
LOL...

I appreciate the reply, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Sunshine
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3 posted 2012-10-10 10:07 AM


Now, this is a , as are you, JL.





"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

jwesley
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4 posted 2012-10-10 02:41 PM


Cool Man!!!

j.

JL
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5 posted 2012-10-12 09:52 AM


Thank you Sunshine and J...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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6 posted 2012-10-12 11:20 PM


A wonderful tribute to a wonderful place.   Allow me to add my thanks to PiP alongside yours.

Michael

latearrival
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7 posted 2012-10-13 03:15 AM


JL, yes, I started singing along with you at the first line. thanks for the melody. jo
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8 posted 2012-10-13 03:21 AM


I did!  I love this.  What a charming tribute!

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2012-10-13 08:11 AM


JL Yes I sang! And thank you so much for putting a song back in my heart.


    lori

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-10-13 09:10 AM


No, JL, but I hummed . . . I hum good. I was the best hummer on my high school humming club way back in tha day . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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11 posted 2012-10-13 11:38 AM


Your song hit the top 40 on my radio!
Thank you JL and Thank you PIP!
Ms. E

JL
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12 posted 2012-10-13 12:01 PM


Mr. M., Certainly, and thank you.
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Thank you, jo!!  Glad you stopped by to sing along!
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Alison…  
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Lori, anytime I can put a song in your heart is a good thing, for me.
Thank you!!
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Haaahahaaaa, Jerry, you had me smiling as I was reading your reply.
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Thank you Ms. E., and yes, thank you PIP…


JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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13 posted 2012-10-14 01:56 PM


What a nice job you have performed here, JL! Lovely tune indeed to praise Pip and Pipsters.

Margherita

Marchmadness
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14 posted 2012-10-15 05:25 AM


What a clever rewrite, JL. Love it and totally agree.
                            Ida

JL
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15 posted 2012-10-15 06:49 AM


Margherita, thank you!!

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Thanks Ida, glad you enjoyed the tune.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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