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Open Poetry #48

afraid of losing me

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-10-09 06:59 PM

so afraid of losing me
it stirs their stupid
into pushing me away

LG(C)10/9/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-09 07:45 PM

It can do that I guess. Nice senryu.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-09-2012 08:57 PM).]

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2012-10-09 08:59 PM

Well said!
Kat >^..^<

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-10-09 09:46 PM

"it stirs their stupid"

I think you should have this
silk-screened on a T-shirt.
Or on a hatband...

Nice write, Lori!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-10-13 08:23 AM

thanks JL always good to see you

lori

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