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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2012-10-08 03:23 PM

More (from Faces Of Love)

Quarter of three in the morning
and I was lying on my back in bed,
breath coming and going,
sweating from the heat,
nothing on but my skin,
reminiscing . . .

I turned over,
lay my arm across
the slickness of your back
and whispered . . . more. . .

© wesley james beard, jr.
october 7, 2012

[This message has been edited by jwesley (10-08-2012 04:24 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-08 03:37 PM

Ahhh . . . Perfect, J . . . Perfect.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2012-10-08 05:45 PM

Oh this is dreamy!!! And then some.

So nice, jw~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-10-08 10:23 PM

Thank you Jerry and Blues ... really appreciate your comments.

j.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-10-09 10:09 PM

Ditto!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2012-10-10 12:31 PM

Oh man. Talk about leaving me breathless. This did it, jimmy.

xoxoxo
Ali

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

6 posted 2012-10-10 01:32 AM

NNNNNNNice!!!!
Kat >^..^<

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2012-10-10 04:02 PM

i tried that one time buddy..

all i got back was that... "Less is more"

i hate it when that happens hahaha

good one Wes!

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2012-10-15 10:12 PM

"More" is a good thing... another helping,
please.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

9 posted 2012-10-16 11:49 AM

Interesting poem..."More"...more of "the same"...to come and go! Hmmm!

Lady Goodman
Member

since 2012-10-04

Posts 193

10 posted 2012-10-16 08:01 PM

Sounds like you caught the succubus!

I love when that happens. er..incubus?

(Even my apparitions are dyslexic.)

But this was lovely, j. And I'd buy ticket for any bus ride you should share, as I tend to find bus rides inspirational.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2012-10-30 01:02 PM

Im glad I didnt miss this one.
Few words but it says so much.
I think I will read it again.

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2012-11-02 02:31 AM

Awesome. Perfect blend of given...and hidden.

CG

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