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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2012-10-04 05:58 PM

GREYGREEN RAIN DREAMS
15 September 2012

grey clouds embracing
leaves shining a zillion greens
soaked earth’s sweet perfume

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2012-10-04 08:54 PM

This smells so fresh and clean!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2012-10-04 09:22 PM

VERY fine !

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2012-10-05 02:06 AM

Thanks, Blues. You sure "got" it!

Thanks, Bruce. Glad you thought so.

Owl

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2012-10-05 01:47 PM

"a zillion greens..."

Yes!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2012-10-05 02:14 PM

Thanks, Karilea. Yes, there really are!

Owl

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2012-10-05 10:13 PM

This reminds me of picking raspberries hidden in the Alder patches when it rained. I loved the smell and I loved the sound of the rain on the leaves.

xoxoxo
Ali

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2012-10-06 01:36 AM

Hi Diana, this is spring in South africa now , i guess, here it is automn and it is raining sadly, your poem brings hapinness and beauty, such a pleasure,

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2012-10-06 02:58 AM

Oh, Alison, I am SO glad it brought you such a beautiful memory. I can picture you with the 5 darling dogalogs in tow, as you pick the raspberries. Thanks for living my poem as you did and for painting poetic pictures, even in your prose replies.

Yann, yes it is Spring here with promises of a warm and glorious Summer. Your Autumn there, though the skies are crying mourning tears at the passing of the Summer and preparing a path for the dying of the seasons in Winter, Winter, there, is the time for Life to rest and sleep and rejuvenate itself so that it is ready to herald renewal in the birth of Spring. Thanks for enjoying my poem.

Owl

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