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Open Poetry #48

Not truly gone

SongBird25
New Member

since 2012-10-03

Posts 1
Wisconsin

0 posted 2012-10-03 10:17 PM

The moon upon the waters edge,
glistens in my eyes,
as a tear runs down my cheek,
we say our last goodbyes.

This is where we once met,
many years before,
this is where we fell in love,
you warmed me to the core.

Many years were happily spent,
wrapped in each others charms,
and now as you whisper goodbye,
you're wrapped within my arms.

Now as the moon begins to set,
and the sun raises its head,
I lay your lifeless body down,
the only part of you that's dead.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2012-10-04 12:45 PM

Wonderful first poem. Welcome to PIP!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-10-04 07:21 AM

Absolutely, the memories persist and live on.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2012-10-04 10:57 AM

Welcome to Passions, SongBird.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-10-04 01:55 PM

Nice, my friend.

j.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2012-10-11 03:45 PM

What a great introduction... I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to Passions!

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