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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-09-29 07:45 PM


I'm Not an Enigma

"I believe I'm a man
thats easy to understand
but this much I'll concede,
I am hard to please."

Speaking of pleasing, even of pleasure,
there is one woman that pleased me in every
possible way, except for a very important one.
She prefers living in Chicago to living in Hawaii,
possibly something to do with her being
hard to please, all I know is love goes
where it wants to go.

JamesLee
28September
2012

  


  



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2012-09-30 09:27 AM


The longing is still strong, I hear you, dear James.

Hawaii is such an incredibly wonderful spot in this world and having the opportunity one would think that your love would choose Hawaii instead of Chicago ... but you got the answer.

Lovely write.

Margherita

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-09-30 09:54 AM


Enjoyed, James,
Ms. E

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2012-09-30 10:29 AM


"all I know is love goes
where it wants to go."

It is the truth that has been written and sung and lamented about for as long as love
has bewitched and bewildered us.
Good one James!


Lori

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2012-09-30 10:43 AM


all  I know is love goes
where it wants to go.


very accurate and clever,

thanks michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2012-09-30 09:21 PM


Nice, James . . .Jerry

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2012-09-30 09:51 PM


"I believe I'm a man
thats easy to understand
but this much I'll concede,
I am hard to please."

THIS should be the quote everyone is quoting.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
7 posted 2012-10-01 11:21 PM


"all I know is love goes
where it wants to go."

Nice writing, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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