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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-09-28 01:37 PM


    The Silence

Deep Autumn forest
Star-tipped
midnight moon___

It is the silence
we do not know

         --- b. e. adams (9/28/2012)


... back for a moment
    don't know if I'll stay

© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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1 posted 2012-09-28 05:12 PM


Don't fight it, Bruce.  You are a poet and poets must write - and other poets need to read. One really needs to escape the world to find that silence.  
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-09-28 06:19 PM


*sigh* the vision is perfect...starlit sky...love it...the silence fills the soul...so good to read your visions again, my friend...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-09-28 07:14 PM


I never figured out why you left in the first place. Heck, Bruce, stay if you want to leave if you want to, it's your life.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2012-09-28 09:05 PM


I left because the lady who said:

1. that she loved me ... (and missed me whenever we were apart) ...

2. that I made her 'happier than she ever imagined ... '

3. That I was the only man who ever made her 'feel entirely womanly' ...

4. That I 'warmed her heart, gladdened her soul, and lightened her spirit' ...

suddenly did an 180 degree reversal and stated that both myself and my
'poetry' are nothing but 'words' and 'silly Romanticism' ... Perhaps she is
quite right?! ... She has since 'disappeared' out of my life completely.

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2012-09-28 09:37 PM


I git news your you, buddy, you're better off without her. Unless she was on PiP, there was not need to run. If is he is on pip ignore
her, completely. Tend to what she has left for you to deal with. I'm rooting gt you Bruce. P.S. those are catch words women have when the4y are setting  on some guy to rip off.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
6 posted 2012-09-28 11:15 PM


Bruce...she is wrong...your words inspire and uplift the heart...I am sorry she could not see the soul of you...*BIG HUGS* my friend...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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