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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-09-27 10:16 PM




The consistency
of all-knowing
is  thick
in it's horrific
as it is smooth with euphoric

That it could be
this Knowingness
is the glue
of existence

Filling the void
between
this and that
and the other
that define them

Comprehending
omnipotence...
Understanding
we cannot
comprehend
the vastness
of our ignorance

For the concept
to have existence
would demand
believing in
the impossible

LGR(C)9/27/12


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-09-28 06:24 AM


Nice poetry, Lori.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2012-09-28 06:30 AM


thanks for the vote of confidence my friend
Good morning!


Lori

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-09-28 10:54 AM


Your words show how hard it is to ponder Omnipotence...you did a great job...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2012-09-28 11:45 AM


Thanks startime! Big Hugs back at you!


Lori

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2012-09-29 04:16 PM


"we cannot
comprehend
the vastness
of our ignorance"

I know....
I mean, yeah...  
maybe?

I'll need a couple-days to study the meaning of this...


JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Sunshine
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6 posted 2012-09-29 08:10 PM


Lori...this is excellent, the first stanza especially. Fine work, my friend.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2012-09-30 11:26 AM


JL, I'm sure it will come to you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Karilea, Thank you so much for your high praise of my work, means a lot lady


Lori

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