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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-09-27 10:01 AM


I have finally been labeled,
Grumpy Old Man; guess I'm stable.
Okey-Doke, I'll go to my bed,
Grumpy Old Man, least I'm not dead.

In my mind I thought younger things,
Like having one more lovers' fling.
But I guess I had better not,
I've just learned I've started to rot.

It's a sobering fact to know,
That no more gardens you will hoe.
Though most days I feel like a pup,
Grumpy Old Man they say is dried up.

Sometimes it's best not knowing truth,
Grumpy Old Man's Fountain of Youth.
So I'll sit on the porch and hush,
And let my mind descend to mush.

©September 27, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-09-27 04:19 PM


LOL...oh, my friend your mind is still as young as ever...old man is not a title I would give you...again your words make me smile and shake my head for life still flows lively in your viens...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-09-27 04:30 PM


Bless you, Karen, I'm happy to hear that you think there is life left in the old body yet. Happy also that I could give you an LOL. Thank you.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-09-27 10:19 PM


Where is the part about being an icon?
Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-09-28 06:22 AM


Grumpy old men don't have icons, Lori. Thanks for being here.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2012-09-28 06:27 AM


no, jerry they are icons.  thank you for being here

Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-09-28 06:31 AM


I concede.

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7 posted 2012-09-30 06:30 AM


think i like that grumpy old man
it made me laugh while reading
thanks for sharing

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