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Open Poetry #48

drying side of dreams

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2013-08-14 11:01 AM

would you prefer those dreams when they were dryer
so they could float unattached across the sky
and you could just watch them from a distance

like they were clouds that would not touch
but would hover sometimes until you whispered
and made them move down onto your skin

where those curves of your charms would caress
until they were dampened like your sighs
and those glances I have seen in your eyes

and would you savor them after you dampened them

_________

daark

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2013-08-15 10:33 PM

It would be a shame to single out one part of this poem that I loved because it flows like a dream as I read it. It whispers against the skin like a secret.

Beautiful secret too.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2013-08-16 04:55 AM

Ms Ali-san...thank you little one

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2013-08-16 02:51 PM

What she said....cool dude.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2013-08-17 06:17 AM

Babyblue...thank you

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-10-10 10:29 AM

quote:
would you prefer those dreams when they were dryer
so they could float unattached across the sky

I am always amazed at your subtle understanding of the feminine psyche, dear D..

Your poems bring smiles, because your pen is intriguing and they bring inspiration, because you write masterfully.

Margherita

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

6 posted 2013-10-10 06:10 PM

Very interesting and thought-provoking!

I think that we must not betray our dreams and keep aloof from them. We need dreaming to realize what we long for. And if we don't long, then we don't live, but just sleep.

Thanks for sharing!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2013-10-11 08:35 AM

Pure DS~~

~~smiling~~

MM

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