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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2012-09-23 08:20 AM



Thoughtless Thoughts


Sometimes I feel so all alone.
It doesn't really matter much.
As timelines come and timelines go,
My thoughts just reign in such and such.

Useless days of no return.
Tireless moments, mind to burn.

Wishing for what never will.
Sitting here amongst the still.

All these hours yet to fill...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-09-23 08:45 AM


Depressing poetry, Maureen, but I can relate, because I have faced the same kind of days and nights as this poem relates. Here's hoping things begin to get better for you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2012-09-23 11:37 AM


thanks Jerry, I've just had a health problem for almost 2 months now, keeping me from going anywhere and  I'm not getting anything  accomplished...just waiting it out and watching time go by.

M

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-09-23 04:33 PM


That is rough.  Down time is depressing.  Hope things will start feeling back to normal ASAP


Lori

Startime1955
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4 posted 2012-09-23 05:35 PM


I pray that your health gets better so that you don't have down days...there is nothing thoughtless in your words...just talent...*BIG BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

suthern
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5 posted 2012-09-26 03:48 PM


Useless days of no return.
Tireless moments, mind to burn.

I can picture you peeking out the windows... unable to do what you'd rather be doing. I hope you feel better soon and have smiles filling your days. *S*

JL
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6 posted 2012-09-26 05:04 PM


Peace for your mind and heart!!
That's what I love about these blue pages; comes with friends attached...
Let the stress out and the camaraderie in.


JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

jwesley
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7 posted 2012-09-26 08:43 PM


fill the hours with what you're good at, Maureen...er, ah, maybe ... yeah...
          like, poetry!

j.

latearrival
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8 posted 2012-09-27 11:12 PM


Sorry to hear you are being tied down. Best to you and fell better soon. jo
Janette
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9 posted 2012-09-28 11:56 AM


"Useless days of no return.
Tireless moments, mind to burn."

Excellent lines here, struck a note in my heart.
Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2012-09-30 07:40 PM


Been there, but never could write about it the way you do.

Be well, Maureen~

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2012-10-02 11:00 AM


Lori, Startime, suthern, JL,jw, jo, Janette, and Lor, thank you so much for your caring responses.  That is what makes this site  so wonderful, that many of us can share the experiences and know that the understanding is always there.

I am not on here much right now, because I don't have the patience for sitting at a computer at the moment.  But I am improving and will try to read and respond when I can.  hugs to you all

M

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12 posted 2012-10-08 12:41 PM


Maureen,

I hope that you are better soon.  It's good to see your poetry here, but it's not good to know that you are facing health issues.  

Know that I am thinking of you.
Alison

Lady Goodman
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13 posted 2012-10-08 02:32 PM


I think of you often...

Be happy.

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