navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #48 » Do you remember?
Open Poetry #48
Post A Reply Post New Topic Do you remember? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2012-09-20 08:56 PM



Do you remember?
The feeling of grass between your toes
The stars above your head
Hands held
Eyes locked

When did the storm start?
Lightening between words
A flood to break the gates
Where's my safety net?
Where's my life jacket?
Should I crack the wine
Dance in the rubble

Let it be
Just let it be
All that I am
Won't ever be good enough

Just let it be

© Copyright 2012 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-09-23 05:42 PM


That is the lie they want us to believe...don't be taken in...who you are is perfect for you...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2012-09-24 12:24 PM


You depict the unraveling so well.

Sad poem, that helpless feeling leaves one feeling so empty.

Your expression is spot on.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2012-09-25 01:32 AM


great imagery and questionning , thanks for the fine penning,


yann

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #48 » Do you remember?

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary