Open Poetry #48 |
In Your Own Hands |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Taking matters in your own hands you are master of your fate You choose your heaven or a hellish state You can bask in the pleasure of your senses until all that exists is you and your oblivion to all but the taste of sweet lips kissed LGRĀ©9/17/12 [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (09-17-2012 01:56 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh my. This is a goodie, Lori. Where do you come up with these gems? ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I plagerize public bathroom walls! LOL! No seriously, the blue buffet offers lots in the way of inspiration. Lori |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hummm.... Maybe more blue-plate specials and less bathroom visits? No!! Plagiarize away! I don't think the original author would complain too loudly... Lori, you have an very special seductive sense of humor. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I know JL , Thank you for noticing and appreciating it. Lori (By the way, the Blue Buffet is my nickname for PIP) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, like this one... A little rhyme and a great message. Sweet lips to kiss might rescue anyone from that oblivion. Nicely done. Michael |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...so... in other words: eat, drink, and be merry for tomorrow is not right now...? -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I like youe style, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Michael! I appreciate your comments, Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes Mark, something along those lines...a little bit about inhaling your roses so intently that for a time thst pleasure overrides everything else. Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Kat! I appreciate it! Lori |
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