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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-09-17 01:15 PM


Taking matters in your own hands
you are master of your fate
You choose your heaven
or a hellish state
You can bask in the pleasure
of your senses
until all that exists
is you and your oblivion
to all but the taste
of sweet lips kissed
LGRĀ©9/17/12

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (09-17-2012 01:56 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-09-17 01:22 PM


Oh my. This is a goodie, Lori. Where do you come up with these gems?

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2012-09-17 02:00 PM


I plagerize public bathroom walls! LOL!
No seriously, the blue buffet offers lots in the way of inspiration.

Lori

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
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3 posted 2012-09-17 04:54 PM


Hummm....
Maybe more blue-plate specials and less
bathroom visits?
No!! Plagiarize away!
I don't think the original author would
complain too loudly...
Lori, you have an very special
seductive sense of humor.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2012-09-17 05:32 PM


I know JL   ,

Thank you for noticing and appreciating it.

Lori  
(By the way, the Blue Buffet is my nickname for PIP)


Michael
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5 posted 2012-09-17 07:42 PM


Ah, like this one...  A little rhyme and a great message.  Sweet lips to kiss might rescue anyone from that oblivion.  Nicely done.

Michael

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2012-09-17 11:37 PM


...so... in other words:  eat, drink, and be merry for tomorrow is not right now...?  

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

katahdin
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7 posted 2012-09-18 03:06 AM


I like youe style, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2012-09-18 08:50 AM


Thanks Michael! I appreciate your comments,

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2012-09-18 08:55 AM


Yes Mark, something along those lines...a little bit about inhaling your roses so intently that for a time thst pleasure overrides everything else.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2012-09-18 01:04 PM


Thanks Kat! I appreciate it!
Lori

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