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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-09-06 06:42 AM



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Lets talk about you
          On that I could chew
                    We'll speak of rebirth
          And make a breakthrough

©August 15, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-09-06 09:08 AM


this makes sense to me...talking things through can make the difference between night and day, turn things completely around.  Good write my friend!


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-09-06 09:19 AM


Yes, if you can't talk thing have a habit of getting bottled up, laying there festering. Thanks Lori, for your comment.

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JL
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3 posted 2012-09-06 01:08 PM


Heeeheee, gave me the big-grin.
Excellent write, Jerry!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-09-06 01:20 PM


Haha! Glad you could find something laughable, JL, Laughing is better than crying.

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ebonygirl
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5 posted 2012-09-06 07:18 PM


Once again, another insightful poem, JP.
Enjoyed, ms. e

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-09-06 07:27 PM


Hello, MS E, and thank you for being here.

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Marchmadness
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7 posted 2012-09-08 03:55 PM


Your wit is showing here, Jerry.
                        Ida

passing shadows
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8 posted 2012-09-08 04:03 PM


if only that were so easy with some people

recently I have talked until I'm blue and nothing ever changes

but hey, live and let live I guess


JerryPat2
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9 posted 2012-09-08 04:09 PM


I guess it is at that, Ida, I'm not always hiding in shadows. Thank you for your comment.

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JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-09-08 04:10 PM


I agree for the most part, passing shadows, talking is usually a waste of time. Still, there is always that chance that what you say will be taken the right way.

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MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2012-09-16 09:05 PM


I like the various interpretations just below the surface with this one...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how:
http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2012-09-16 09:09 PM


Yep. They are there, for sure. Thank you, Mark, very much.

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