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Hara Pranay!
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Hara Pranay! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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Hara Pranay! Tacky heavy veils of pollen frolic to August tune, Thirsty throats, eager lungs longing for her since June, Droplets fill up empty memories, almost overflowing, Lal Kekadda venturing out, Langurs whistle blowing, Charming Cheetal grazing spree, spotted deer roaming free, Majestic Mayura, is dancing emperor or just a trainee, Relentless songs of Koyal vacates silence from breeze, Talkative bulky Mendak giving motionless Ghariyal a real tease, Disappearing stripes leaving behind terror pug marks on land, Munching fresh Machhli over river banks, painted storks stand, Slithering Kala Raj Nag loudly hissing lyrics of Hara Pranay! Himalayan big Balu playing with bees bows to her in Vinay! ©Prasad.N 05th September 2012. All rights reserved to Prasad.N "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many things I didn't recognize herein, Prasad, but you made it easy to understand their nature by describing what was going on around them. Good writing. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Prasad, I so enjoy it when you make me look up words. Your "green" poem is lovely! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I also had to look up a few words, Prasad but it is always worth the effort to understand your lovely poetry. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very exotic sound to this beautiful Nature poem. I much enjoyed it, dear Prasad. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for sharing your world and making the surrounding elements come to life. Love the tropical feel to this. Very nice writing, Prasad~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Jerry. Sorry had to include few words from Hindi and Sanskrit, glad to know their actions were read. Thank you for checking out my blog and glad to know we share same birthday!  Appreciate your kind words.Thank you so much for taking time to read and commenting, Karilea. Really appreciate your kind words.Glad to know you enjoyed my attempt. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Ida. Thank you kindly for your kind words, appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Margherita. Glad to know you enjoyed my attempt. Appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, BluesSerenade. Really appreciate your kind words. P.S. Hara=Green, Pranay=Romance, Lal Kekadda=Red Crab, Mayura=Peacock, Koyal=Black bird, Mendak=Frog, Ghariyal=Indian Crocodile, Machhli=Fish, Kala Raj Nag=Black King Cobra, Balu=Bear, Vinay=respect,grateful "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello prasd, this is qùite delightfùl impressions, with nicce exotic words and a sweet atmosphere, thanks for the lovely write, yann |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting. Good to hear from you Yann. Appreciate your kind words. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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