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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2012-09-05 06:53 AM

Shadows lengthen like the nights,
darker each day after dusk,
cooler breath of breaze, softer.
Starlight absorbed into a new
mind, changed by long waited
for mild autumn fayer.Senses
roused, quivering and ready, awaiting,
longing for dry days dropping
like amber dreams, leading, calling
to take you where sundrenched
trees sway together in their
florid but fading garb, dancing
to a tune only they
hear, cascading colourful carpets
of leaves, shaking them off,
a final act before winter
snatches light from their show,
plunging them into dark inaction.

music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (09-05-2012 08:54 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-09-05 12:31 PM

Exquisite, dear Goldenrose. Most beautiful imagery.

Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2012-09-05 07:31 PM

Your poetry is rich and never fails to captivate me and fill my senses.

Beautiful poetry Goldenrose~

....as always~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2012-09-05 09:23 PM

grand-fine imagery and Autumnal impression!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2012-09-08 03:34 PM

you've always had a way of giving me goosebumps

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2012-09-08 05:12 PM

A beautiful, dreamy painting of Nature, in all her quiet beauty.

Owl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2012-09-12 08:35 AM

trees sway together in their
florid but fading garb, dancing
to a tune only they
hear, cascading colourful carpets
of leaves, shaking them off,
a final act before winter
snatches light from their show,
plunging them into dark inaction.

What a beautiful image of autumn! Fall is so brief where I live... but I can appreciate the splendors of autumn through words like this! *S*

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2012-09-20 05:43 AM

Always a treat to read.... shared adoration of a favorite season always brings memories and thoughts close to ones heart!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

8 posted 2012-10-01 10:52 PM

back for a 2nd. read of this fine 'write' !

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2012-10-02 11:38 AM

Phil, I think this was one of your best and I am so glad I was able to read you again.

M

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