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The Meeting
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The Meeting |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us cheap California burgundy gesticulating carelessly swirling dangerously in fine crystal longing to be supped, sipped, inhaled wobbling treacherously beyond the void I sweep my hand toward expensive perfume which fails to hide your animal sensuousness I sniff and wobble, wobble and sniff following a trajectory beneath a smudged moon sensing your animalistic nature and soul I know you're not satisfied in your restraint we talk politely offer each other suitable, though forced banter as we courteously speak it is our eyes perfidious holes, each sensing black depths of our souls even darker pleasantries of our past you realize I am but one more beastly shadow stalking your manicured turf we clink glasses in the superficialness of the night's blushing I'm almost angrily in lust staring at the enjoyable arch of your neck in the distorted yellow of the moon's smolder you lean into me asking for a kiss my mouth trembles understanding the night is ours time for flesh to consume flesh ©August 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I could see all of this clearly. Sometimes ya just gotta cut right to the chase.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yeah you right, Nicole, them thars my sentiments exactly. Thank you for such an early morning comment. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow...not so subtly dark, but intense, and driven... enjoyed! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am grateful that you found "The Meeting" to be something special, Karilea, thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Now... THAT, is a meeting. Nice write, Jerry. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yeah, you right, JL and thanks. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hot stuff guy! I really think it is one of your best or at least one of my favorites. WOW! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank, Lori, I sorta liked it myself. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
It's going to be an interesting night ... Enjoyed, JP ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh heh, I would say so, ms. E, I should think so. Appreciate the thought. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Time for flesh to consume flesh." I enjoy reading this one...tells a lot but also leaves much to the imagination...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James, for being here and commenting. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Another very strong visual which could, indeed, span across time...  -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sure Mark, my poem spans across time, of course it does. My work, my poetry are about 90% taken from reality of a life I have led in the past and the ten percent is from what I am going through today as I inch closer and closer to specter's crypt. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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