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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us I'm here with my broad attention cherishing each precious burned into my looking back tomorrow's dreams are homeless today is the fragile of sustain the beauty and wonder of imagining the night is a blossom in crescendo I am here curious and there are you the sum of your delight you have taught me of your superior I bow and scrape with unusual and sing your song of whisper and still . . . ©August 13, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-04-2012 07:06 AM).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I really like this, so much Jerry. It is a mixture of serious and almost wistful at the same time, what a great balance. "tomorrow's dreams are homeless today is the fragile of sustain" I especially loved these two lines; I wish I had thought them up! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thank you dearly,Nicole, for you thoughtful comments about my poem, they are much appreciated. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I really like this one my friend! I especially enjoy your style here. You are so versatile! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
We never stop learning. You help in that endeavor, Jerry. Excellent! Looks like an A+ write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, big time, JL, I appreciate your kind comments. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-06-2012 09:20 PM).] |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
free flowing emotions, fine writing, Jerry! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, Prasad, for your kind comments. I checked out your blog and found out that we share the same birthday. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
today is the fragile of sustain... I am here curious ... you have taught me of your superior... I bow and scrape with unusual... ~*~ Great lines! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Karilea, I appreciate the read and comments. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Beautiful lines here, Jerry. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Margherita, I appreciate the time you took to read my poem and the comments afterwards . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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