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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-09-01 07:29 AM


     
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I walk the walk
I need nothing else
I've made friends with the shadow
we're buddies, he and I
we bare ourselves
to the cold wind
the one they sing about
Mariah
the days are long
nights they stretch out
still . . .
I walk the walk
it's all about the walk
and friendly shadows

©August 6, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-01-2012 11:58 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-09-01 08:08 AM


walking the walk, walks circles around talking the talk... I'm likin' this one Jerry.


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-09-01 08:21 AM


Many thanks, Lori.

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JL
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3 posted 2012-09-01 11:46 AM


Yeah!
I agree with Lori, excellent write, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-09-01 11:57 AM


Thanks, JL, much appreciated.

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Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-09-01 12:58 PM


To walk the walk is much more honest than talking the talk...I like the honesty in this poem, my friend...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-09-01 01:09 PM


I agree with everything you said about the honesty part, Karen, and thank you for saying it.

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Margherita
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7 posted 2012-09-01 06:10 PM


You show a profound awareness in this write, Jerry. To walk the walk in full awareness of all the challenges is our privilege.

Beautiful.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-09-01 06:17 PM


Margherita , you always know exactly the right thing to say.

quote:
To walk the walk in full awareness of all the challenges

is a perfect example of what I mean, my friend. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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9 posted 2012-09-02 01:06 AM


Friendly shadows sure as heck beat the twisted, heinous ones don't they?  I know your dog walks that walk with you too.  You're a lucky man, Jer.

Michael

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-09-02 06:50 AM


I firmly believe that I am a lucky man, Michael. Thank you.

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