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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 82


0 posted 2012-08-29 10:22 PM


Remember when we fell in love?
We used to go by the lake
and watch the thunder snow.

Mornings of breakfast in bed,
letting me shave your head.
No money,
but we paid attention to the little things.
We thought we had love all figured out.

Then I started trippin'.
My selfish ways broke your heart.
I pulled away from you,
thinking there was something better
on the horizon beyond.

Now I'm here
alone, realizing I was wrong.
I apologize for being an
insecure, indecisive  woman.
A woman searching for a love
she already had.
I was wondering if I could have it again?
I'll love you better than I used to.


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2012-08-29 10:59 PM


I feel this one

hindsight is 20/20, I guess


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-08-30 07:54 AM


Sometimes it is too late when you realize that, Street Poet, was for me at any rate.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2012-08-30 05:02 PM


So very sad...sometimes we don't know what we had until it's gone...I feel your pain...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2012-09-07 10:34 PM


Even if we part from someone we love the love will live on in our hearts, and once we have shared love with someone we always want to share that love...James
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2012-09-16 08:02 PM



This is such a reflective piece of poetry
and your humble message touches me.

What's love got to do with it??
*Everything*

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