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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-08-29 10:06 PM


Jaded & Unclear

When love doesn't last
I feel like kicking
loves ase

but what the hele
love doesn't always
go so well,
you know it
you just won't
say it
because you want
to believe that
love is swell

and it is
until some clowns
mess around
using the word "love"
when they're
far from sincere
and in the process
the real meaning of love
becomes jaded & unclear.

JamesLee
28August
2012

  

  

  

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2012-08-29 11:00 PM


yep

good write

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-08-30 07:52 AM


Can't argue the point.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2012-08-30 01:56 PM


When we know the real meaning of love, we can cope with those who don't, without being weakened by their superficiality.

Nice and thought provoking, dear James.



Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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4 posted 2012-08-30 06:04 PM


So true...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2012-08-31 03:55 PM


you are so very right, I'm sorry to say.
good write!


Lori

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2012-08-31 05:19 PM


So true.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2012-09-04 09:54 PM


Thank you passing, JerryPat, Margherita,
Startime, Lori and JL for the wonderful responses...James

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