'Endless' Mt. Forests (re-worked)

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Open Poetry #48

'Endless' Mt. Forests (re-worked)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2012-08-28 10:36 PM

         'Endless' Mt. Forests

Here ...

I become the deep-forest path
  to nowhere
in answer to the siren call
of this limpid deep Summer night
and the few soft-velvet clouds
  of late evening silver-grey
that sail the infinite oceans of
  space and time
with a fine, mystic moon
and the dance of shadows
to the forgiving starry silence
of Nature's immeasurable truths.

                 --- b. e. adams (8/28/2012)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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1 posted 2012-08-29 07:08 AM

The wonderful atmosphere you created invites to linger and to remain in silent contemplation.

Just beautiful, Bruce!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-08-29 10:42 AM

quote:
and the dance of shadows
to the forgiving starry silence

These two lines just did something to me, Bruce. Touching.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-08-29 12:40 PM

Agree with Margherita, my friend. Well done.

j.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-08-29 01:24 PM

It was the first line that captured me ...
Enjoying your poetry, Bruce!
Ms. E

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-08-29 03:11 PM

Ah...as always your words bring a vision of natures beauty to life...well done, Bruce...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2012-08-29 04:19 PM

This is sheer beauty, Bruce. I relate so well to the way you identify yourself with one voice of nature and are mesmerised by another part and melt into the rest.

Owl

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2012-08-30 05:46 PM

Wonderfully serene and beautiful, Bruce. Just reading this has such a calming effect.
Ida

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