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Sunshine
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0 posted 2012-08-27 10:51 PM



Indian Love Song

Clouds are scattering
Moon is filling with love song
Morse code messages


© 8-27-12 KRJ


© Copyright 2012 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-08-28 06:11 AM


Here in Thibodaux
Issac is getting closer
Hurricane alley

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2012-08-28 09:49 AM


Under night's cover
cicada song may be heard
be safe, be safe, be


Thanks, Jerry!

Margherita
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3 posted 2012-08-28 01:32 PM


Visible moon light
love tunes spread from heart to heart
songs fill stormy nights



Beautiful and inspiring, dear Karilea.

May Isaac behave and let the moon be visible.


Margherita  

Ericc
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4 posted 2012-08-28 03:46 PM


Beautiful!
jwesley
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5 posted 2012-08-28 10:19 PM


While your Indian Love Song was wonderful, I liked you reply to Jerry even better (or at least "laughably" better)!!


Enjoyed them both...

j.

Startime1955
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6 posted 2012-08-29 02:55 PM


Beautiful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Prasad Nataraj
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7 posted 2012-09-05 07:15 AM


few words, yet wonderful read! fine writing!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

JL
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8 posted 2012-09-05 01:13 PM


Succinctly Beautiful, Ms. Sunshine.
Enjoyed!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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