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Open Poetry #48

locks and leaves

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-08-23 05:41 PM

She cried inside
albeit to a daring silence

Those clothes fell
onto an easy fall
where leaves became the gentle
tease to a rather frivolous fight
between her heart and soul

She was hurt unlike the summer earth
a pain that ran from dusk till dawn
under a lust of such wide surprise
that she cried for heaven
for a fate, oval shaped
maybe slightly opaque

That left her tears sordid
unneeded of her iron grip, anymore.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2012-08-23 05:47 PM

You write some deep poetry and yet you keep it soft and smoothe around the edges.

Well done, Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2012-08-23 08:20 PM

Blues-

I appreciate the comments. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-08-23 08:25 PM

I feel the struggle in every line...only she will know which will win and if she can unclench her hands...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-08-24 10:09 AM

Enjoying your poetry, Tomer.
Ms. E

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2012-08-24 05:28 PM

Starttime-

Happy it resonated with you.

Cheers

T

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2012-08-24 05:28 PM

Ms. E -

I'm happy you are. Always appreciate the love.

Cheers

Tomer

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