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jwesley
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2012-08-22 11:17 AM




Note: Plant known as "Ugly Plant", "Orchid Cactus" and
      "Nightblooming cereus "

© Copyright 2012 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-08-22 12:02 PM


And what profound beauty you created for us to behold, dear Jimmy.

Such an elegant refined presentation!

Just leaves me with a sigh...

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2012-08-22 12:12 PM


When you are in love you can write poetry such as this. Beautifully done, J, and I know your heart was in every line.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-08-22 12:33 PM


Your talent for grabbing the reader by the heart, mind, and eye, is phenomenal.
What aspect did you leave out?
NONE!
The title is pure justice to the distinct
way you worded your thoughts.
This, to me, is excellent word-art.
It's a wow...

JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Startime1955
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Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2012-08-22 06:40 PM


This poem is stunningly beautiful...I cannot help but say "I breathe deeply of his scent making my body respond perfectly to his"...WOW...your words really touched me deeply...thank you...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

suthern
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5 posted 2012-08-23 02:54 PM


And love invades my very life,
because,
I am the beholder,
and the beauty of you
is mine to see.

The whole presentation is so very beautiful... but these lines go straight into my soul! Absolutely stunning!!

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2012-08-23 03:44 PM


Awww you, this is so pretty, and such a tender loving write.

Good on ya jw!!

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
7 posted 2012-08-23 09:21 PM


Thank you for all the kind comments, my friends.

The flower in the picture was my first bloom on a plant I've had almost 5 years.
Over a week or so, it gave me 9 more, all opening sometime after mid-night to 3a.m., and being closed and gone by 9a.m.  If interested in several other shots, will be posting them on my photo site probably tomorrow or the next day -

http://photographybyda.zenfolio.com/  - under the Flora category, and Ugly Plant folder.

j.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2012-08-25 09:46 PM


Very nice...James
Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2012-08-31 04:46 AM


Love this, Jimmy.
            iIda

ebonygirl
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10 posted 2012-09-10 11:52 PM


Beautifully written and photographed,
Ms. E

OwlSA
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11 posted 2012-09-11 03:10 AM


Exquisite poem and exquisite plant, Jimmy.  Please tell the plant from me that it is not ugly, but very beautiful.  I understand the elation you must have felt during the hours that they bloomed way into the night - and longing to share the excitement with so many others, but not wanting to be away and miss a moment.  

I looked at the other photos of the beautiful plant on your site and plan to go back when I can make the time, to see at least all of the flora and probably at least some of the others (haven't looked at their folder names yet).  

How on earth does Da come from Jimmy Wesley (as I understand your name is) - oh, I get it, perhaps that is short for Dad?

Owl

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
12 posted 2012-09-11 02:12 PM


Thanks Owl ... you're welcome to look at anything on the website.  Only thing protected with a password is the Family.  You're also welcome to download anything if interested - if any credit is ever needed would just like to get credit for the photo.  Any problems with download, just let me know.

Da - actually this came about though my grand-daughter.  The "Family" was trying to decide what to have the grandchildren call me - I didn't want Paw Paw (as was customary for last 150 years), or grandpa, or Opa, and during the process of throwing names at her, she looked at me one day and said Da!  We still threw names, and she still insisted on Da...so Da I am to 4 of them now, and I'm no longer Jimmy to any of the family --- I'm Da! (She's pushing 11 now and the name calling was when she was just learning to talk).

Sorry for the long story...

Here's Ryleigh Brooke ...

Photography by Da: People 001 &emdash;

j.

[This message has been edited by jwesley (09-11-2012 03:36 PM).]

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
13 posted 2012-09-11 03:23 PM


Thanks for the explanation.  I wasn't too far off!  Thanks for the permission to view any of the public photos on your website.  I look forward to it when I can make the time.  I am not sure who you mean by Ryleigh Brooke and whether I should have been able to click on the padlock, but I did and nothing opened.  

Owl

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
14 posted 2012-09-11 03:37 PM


Oops, am I bad ... try that picture now "Ryleigh Brooke"
OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
15 posted 2012-09-11 03:54 PM


Oh, WOW!  This must be the granddaughter who initiated your name of Da.  She is beautiful, cute, vivacious and looks an absolute honeybunch!

Thanks for doing whatever you did so that we can see her photo, Jimmy.

Owl

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