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Ericc
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0 posted 2012-08-20 03:31 PM



So much unnoticed - as if our eyes were meant to
view the world but not the secrets of its
gifts.
Yet grace appears in the faith beyond
our senses...it's the sway of leaves
dancing in an unseen breeze.

There's a holy breeze constant in its giving...close your
eyes and sway

© Copyright 2012 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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1 posted 2012-08-20 05:21 PM


*sigh*...so very beautiful...I closed my eyes and the vsion came to life...I love this...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-08-20 08:35 PM


Very pretty,
Ms. E

Margherita
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3 posted 2012-08-22 06:50 AM


so much unnoticed ... indeed, dear Eric.

Another wonderful nudge to BE AWARE of the breath of life that sways us.

Reading your words is always deeply enriching.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2012-08-22 11:13 PM


Enjoyed...James
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2012-08-26 04:01 PM


Lovely write, Ericc.
              Ida

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