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mvvenkataraman
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since 2011-11-12
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India

0 posted 2012-08-20 01:56 PM



Life is for a very short period
During which we use hope-method
Even if you come just only third
Tell yourself an encouraging word

Have no inferiority complex
It will humiliate you and vex,
Your own self, you will perplex
If with society you love to mix

Your present worry has no basis
You are living in an oasis
Boldly you now face the crisis
You will surely attain real bliss

Life-path will be hazardous
As dirty tricks, fate does
Problems will be numerous
Remedy is in being humorous

Gain in life vast experience
And develop high common sense
Attain goal using perseverance
Combine patience with tolerance.

Please try again and again
You will surely stand to gain
Perfection, you can attain
Sweet success, you can obtain

Keep calm under severe pressure
Consider work as a great pleasure
Bliss is a priceless treasure
In terms of peace,life you measure

Offer to others maximum help
That alone is the first step
In life for gloriously coming up
Close your mouth via silence-zip

Take time, but do intelligently
Enjoy victory relishing silently
Start now itself very confidently
Success will salute you obediently

Surrender into God's merciful laps
He will save your from every lapse
By increasing feather in your caps
Pray please my dearest lovely chaps.

mvvenkataraman


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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-08-20 05:17 PM


Well said...and I do pray...thank you...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

mvvenkataraman
Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72
India
2 posted 2012-08-21 04:11 AM


Thank you for your kind response
God comes secretly in human form
And showers us with His blessings
I hope that you are one such Angels.

mvvenkataraman

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