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g7
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since 2011-11-15
Posts 20


0 posted 2012-08-18 07:51 PM


Paint my heart in colors
that find their light in you.
Breathe into my life
the tints and hues,
reflections of love waiting to be made.

Linger on my skin,
lips of satin, breath of heaven;
your hands around my heart;
molding, kneading, blending
the melodies I have longed to sing

Of love hoped for, now found
in the corners of your smile;
of the fire in your eyes;
of my hands that leave you breathless,
lost in the scents of love in the making.

Reach for me, you will find me;
strain to touch me, I am already there.
I will not disappoint.
'Round this love I draw a circle
in your favorite shade of purple
And give to you the garden of my heart.

© Copyright 2012 g7 - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-08-18 07:57 PM


To say that you are not a willing participant in this love-saturated fantasy of yours would be understating it.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-08-18 07:57 PM


"And give to you the garden of my heart."
What a beautiful poem...this statement at the end is perfect...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2012-08-29 09:59 PM


Really nice romantic writing...James
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