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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-08-18 07:48 AM



you have that vase of glances within your eyes
as on occasion you review the banana leaves
and how they remain proper even in samba
with the afternoon dressed in her breezes

I haven't worn my coveting jacket for years
but it still fits my intentions, a bit more snug
in the right places you mention within casual
when your calves whisper against their nudity

and you move them around to keep me guessing
how far above them you have hidden heaven
perhaps closer to your heart than your thoughts
but you said I will just love the neighborhood

and the association fees are hardly a whisper


_______________

daark

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Nicole
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1 posted 2012-08-18 09:02 AM


Covet looks good on you.  Do you think the association fees cover white-washing picket fences?  /grin
Love, the vase

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-08-18 02:50 PM


Made me smile at the vision I saw...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2012-08-19 06:30 AM


Ms Vase...the whitewash of ravishtown is more of a immersion process...saturation and all..special offers available too.  

___

Ms. Star, thank you lady friend

Margherita
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4 posted 2012-08-19 07:03 AM


quote:
I haven't worn my coveting jacket for years
but it still fits my intentions, a bit more snug


Once again I am impressed by the uniqueness and inimitability of your poetic skills.

Thanks for the smiles!

Margherita


Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2012-08-19 07:38 AM


Ms Mar, thank you lady friend
Marsha
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6 posted 2012-08-20 09:15 AM


Really intriguing, I love the lines in this they are just delicious. Well done poetic prince.
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2012-08-20 09:26 AM


Ms Marsha...thank you ms
BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2012-08-23 03:48 PM


and how they remain proper even in samba
with the afternoon dressed in her breezes

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You make me swoon and sway me so good, DS~

Love your stuff!!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2012-08-24 08:48 AM


Babyblue....you smile me with your tan candy whispers...thank you babe
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2012-09-04 09:58 PM


Very nice...James
Prasad Nataraj
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11 posted 2012-09-05 06:46 AM


visual treat and alot left for readers imagination! fine writing, Daark!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2012-09-05 07:56 AM


James...thanks guy

___

Prasad, thanks amigo

Sunshine
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13 posted 2012-09-05 12:32 PM


I'm pretty sure
I've commented
how wonderfully
you whisper
poems


Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2012-09-05 08:34 PM


Sweetsun, thank you lady
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