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Open Poetry #48

Enigma Illusion

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2012-08-10 02:40 PM

ENIGMA ILLUSION
2 August 2012

Magical
pirouettes
and lifts
and leaps
in wordless bliss
a pas de deux
on a shady carpet
soft with dew
and the only audience
protective trees
and silent forest creatures
who are our soundless music
for they feel and feed our souls,
waft down the year
to me in reverence,
and my quiet smile
seeps softly
to the marrow
of my bones
in memory
of what
is not.

Owl

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-08-10 04:31 PM

WOW!!! Tender, soft and very beautiful...I feel this poem...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2012-08-11 07:57 AM

Thank you, Startime.

Owl

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2012-08-15 03:47 PM

Awesome...really, really awesome!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2012-08-15 04:51 PM

Thank you, Eric. Smiles.

Owl

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

5 posted 2012-08-15 09:11 PM

Just magical! enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2012-08-16 12:53 PM

I agree with katahdin, Magical is just the word for this one, Diana.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2012-08-16 05:27 AM

Thanks, Kat (I have just LOVE your signature - both kitty cat faces!) and Ida, both of you, for your lovely comments.

Owl

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