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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-08-10 01:07 PM



do you still drive down memory lane sometimes
and look at that special turn off place
where the sand of our cove knew your glances
and your bare foot lady like too,  on occasion

when you were tan and nervous about talking
but you put on lipstick and nothing under
then went looking from behind your glasses
to make sure you had me where you wanted me

before climbing up into that cloudless sky
and asking me to hold you there for hours
between hover and then fall in love again
before you climbed back down for proper reasons

and caught your heart sleeve upon my purpose

______

daark

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1 posted 2012-08-10 02:26 PM


do you still drive down memory lane sometimes
and look at that special turn off place
where the sand of our cove knew your glances

Of course. *S* No matter how many times we try to burn those mental maps, they're inscribed on our brain... and our hearts. *S* Beautiful write!!

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-08-10 03:04 PM


Ms Suthern....thanks lady friend..
Startime1955
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3 posted 2012-08-10 04:28 PM


*sigh* what a wonderful memorie...I love it...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-08-10 04:36 PM


Ms Star...thank you lady
Nicole
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5 posted 2012-08-10 04:54 PM


Every day...
/smile

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-08-10 05:38 PM


Ms Nitch..your eyes are where they dance lovely.  Thank you
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7 posted 2012-08-11 01:02 AM


Those last few lines grabbed me by the heart strings, fantastic something I can relate to and gently smile about
Margherita
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8 posted 2012-08-11 04:31 AM


quote:
before climbing up into that cloudless sky
and asking me to hold you there for hours


That is the true art in love ... and how good it feels !

Exquisite romantic reminiscing.

Margherita


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2012-08-11 05:31 AM


Ms Muted, thank you

____

Ms Mar, thank you lady friend

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2012-08-12 10:31 AM


Awww D~, you're killing me here.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

before climbing up into that cloudless sky
and asking me to hold you there for hours
between hover and then fall in love again

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This feels like a dream within a dream that I have dreamt before.

I do love it when you write this way!

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2012-08-12 12:09 PM


Babyblue...somewhere off Victoria where the dunes smile at lovers..thanks babe


Toerag
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12 posted 2012-08-17 10:09 PM


Good grief! How ya doin' old man that's done at least as many drugs that I've done?..LOL...hope all is well with ya bud and happy to see you're still hanging around...
Amaryllis
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13 posted 2012-08-18 01:57 AM


Very pretty, Dark  


A

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2012-08-18 05:23 AM


Toemigo..thanks guy

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Ms A', thank you lady

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