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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us The crow saw me and on cue On a high line wire it flew But I paid it no never mind Never thinking of a crime The sun was shinning bright Not thinking of my plight I passed beneath the crow Bombs away there she blows Splat on top of my head And down my cheek it bled I've a surprise for him My Smith & Wesson is grim He returns to that wire today Tonight in my fryer he'll pay. ©June 21, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-10-2012 12:48 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...crows are such unique individuals... in fact, I'm reading [finishing] the book IQ84...and a crow figures in it with distinction, but I'm not sure of the author's reasoning, just yet. Good chuckle. Thanks! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, Karilea, I have picked on the pesky birds for years in my poem. They deserve it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 i giggled...this is cute  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm happy I brought up a giggle, muted, and thank you for putting a smile on my face. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
LOL!!! I could see it clearly for we have a family of crows here...LOL...I think they know just what they are doing...bon apatite (not sure of the spelling but have fun...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, I have no doubt the black (*&%#@$%^ know what they are doing, Karen. Hahaha Thanks for chiming in on this one. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I passed beneath the crow Bombs away there she blows Splat on top of my head And down my cheek it bled" Now that's priceless! Excellent write, Jerry. Enjoyed the story. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heehee! Thanks, JL. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
But, dear Jerry, that was a blessing ... and I bet the crow was quite satisfied by having centered you  (here it is considered good luck ...). So you might want to change your intentions and try your fortune.Smiles. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Too late dear Margherita, but maybe the next time I will try your thoughts. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
LOL! [Edit Profanity removed - Ron] You crack me up! Thanks for the laugh! Lori [This message has been edited by Ron (08-21-2012 12:30 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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