navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #48 » L.O.V.E.
Open Poetry #48
Post A Reply Post New Topic L.O.V.E. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Freely_expressing
Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69
NSW, Australia

0 posted 2012-08-09 10:30 PM



Loose terminology
Often misconstrued
Vows to last eternally
Ending rather soon

© Copyright 2012 Ben Crow - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-08-09 11:21 PM


This poem sure says the way it often is...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Freely_expressing
Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69
NSW, Australia
2 posted 2012-08-10 01:38 AM


I think it stemmed from my musings on the way love has been so...diluted by modern society
Freely_expressing
Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69
NSW, Australia
3 posted 2012-08-10 01:39 AM


Hence the cynical air.
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2012-08-10 02:00 AM


Very good acrostic. LOVE in "capital letters" IS, but so often we associate it essentially with the exclusive emotions we feel for another. While it lasts it is eternal

Margherita

Freely_expressing
Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69
NSW, Australia
5 posted 2012-08-10 02:36 AM


I agree! It is that kind of understanding of love that causes it to be not so eternal I think.
Thanks for commenting

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2012-08-10 07:11 AM


Lasting forever means, wait, let me consult my lawyer.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Freely_expressing
Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69
NSW, Australia
7 posted 2012-08-10 08:35 PM


Haha, indeed.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #48 » L.O.V.E.

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary