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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-08-09 05:39 AM



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the folds and petals
of womanhood
open out and unfurl
like a cut ribbon of a new ship to sail

I can't think of anything
more intimate
than a new ship
nudging up against a new dock

©June 16, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

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© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-08-09 09:00 AM


*grin*...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-08-09 09:41 AM


Heehee . . . Thanks, Karen for tha hug . . .

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Margherita
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3 posted 2012-08-09 03:14 PM


You seem to ride waves of pleasure, Jerry!

Very nice comparison.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-08-09 03:23 PM


I thank you most humbly, Margherita, for your kind words.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2012-08-11 02:49 PM


My friend I believe you can take anything and make it romantic! You make magic.

Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-08-11 03:00 PM


Thank you, Lori.

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ebonygirl
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7 posted 2012-08-11 04:44 PM


Uh... smiling here.
Good one, JP,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-08-11 04:45 PM


Smiling with you, Ms. E, smiling with you.

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