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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-08-08 10:27 PM


Sharing Feelings

It is human nature
to want happiness
and when I am
in your presence
I feel the happiness
of my desires for you
and I know
that its your goal
to pursue happiness also
so if you would
grace me with your presence
it would please my heart
and fuel my soul.
I have made my choice
I want to share
some special moments with you
I can only hope and pray
you feel those feelings too.

JamesLee
08August
2012




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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-08-08 10:39 PM


I hope for you that she shares your feeling...well said...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2012-08-12 10:42 AM


The simple beauty in your poetry is refreshing.

Nice, James~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2012-08-16 09:57 PM


Thank you Startime and Blues Serenade for the nice response...James
suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
4 posted 2012-08-21 12:33 PM


I love this, James... my heart leaks similar words! *S*
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2012-08-21 06:05 PM


Nay but a fool would resist such charms, my friend, even if only to taste for a while...

well done..

j.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2012-08-21 06:06 PM


"I can only hope and pray
you feel those feelings too."

A soul shaker!
Great write, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 2012-08-21 06:36 PM


A beautiful and heartfelt expression of love.  May it be returned to you...  and then some.

Michael

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