navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #48 » Void
Open Poetry #48
Post A Reply Post New Topic Void Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178


0 posted 2012-08-08 03:56 PM



Unspoken and the void is
large yet still but a
breath between
us


© Copyright 2012 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-08-08 04:00 PM


I can understand this.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2012-08-08 06:14 PM


How true this is...spoken completely in so few words...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2012-08-09 12:37 PM


a breath  indeed and a heartbeat ...

Beautiful!

Margherita

muted
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2012-08-09 12:49 PM


nodding, because i KNOW this sentiment. I enjoyed reading it...
Zall
Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
5 posted 2012-08-09 03:02 PM


Mmmm... nice.
ebonygirl
Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
6 posted 2012-08-09 03:06 PM


Enjoyed the beauty in this...
Ms. E

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #48 » Void

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary