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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2012-08-07 04:21 PM


Always,through warm days
and cold nights I
want my love to
sleep safely.Awakened by
sights to move me,by
hands that caress me,
by lips that hold me closer.
Heart love to heart love,
beating as one,entangled
lovelight shining a lifepulse
we feel and cherrish.

music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou

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Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-08-07 06:07 PM


This is a wish filled with tenderness...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2012-08-07 08:39 PM


You write from a sensitive heart and romance the written word beautifully.
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2012-08-09 03:30 PM


quote:
lovelight shining a lifepulse


Exquisite.

Margherita

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2012-08-11 05:56 PM


Love the wish!
May it always be...
Ms. E

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
5 posted 2012-08-12 02:05 AM


Sweetly written
Nigelinoz
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6 posted 2012-08-12 05:14 AM


Lovely,speaks to my soul.
Cheers
N'oz

You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool-
Irish Proverb

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7 posted 2012-08-21 12:30 PM


What a beautiful romantic wish! *S*
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2012-08-29 07:38 AM


Romanticism most fine!
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