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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2012-08-06 04:14 PM

Heart of My Heart

Heart of my heart:
my infatuation in poetry and song –
your words harmonious, symphonic,
a phratry or dynasty written
playing out a tune
as if time were placated
for you alone
melding elements
in thought and rhyme
in sync… beguiling,
sensuous, glorious
in sight and sound
treasures for
hearing…and more,
for holding,
owned by heart
and savored in thought –
a sharpening of emotion,
limning sincerity…warmth,
clarity, a promising…loving

Oh, heart of my heart,
just now,
you have captured mine…
verse by verse
I recite –
breathing every word
tasting experiences
in charming display…captivating,
your memoir –
stirring and admired.
Verse by verse
in my spirit
is a living treasure
which is
your song, your living,
your sharing
alive…distinct soul,
generous and caring.

Oh, heart of my heart,
just now,
you have captured mine…

.
.
.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-08-06 11:33 PM

This poem is stunning and filled with a poets heart..I really enjoyed reading it...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-08-07 12:49 PM

Beautiful, JL.
Ms. E

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-08-07 01:56 AM

Fine writing...James

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2012-08-07 03:24 AM

Love it! There's a depth there that is most gratifying to see.

Helen

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-08-07 06:13 PM

Startime1955: Thank you

Ms. E: I appreciate your kind words, or word, very mucho.

James: thanks.

Ms. Honeybunch, I am so glad you enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-08-07 06:32 PM

When you give into the romantic within you, it is very satisfying to read, JL. This is one of those that is more than a little special.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-07-2012 09:39 PM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2012-08-07 06:36 PM

Thank you Sir-Jerry. I do appreciate your reply.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2012-08-07 08:44 PM

and savored in thought –
a sharpening of emotion,
limning sincerity…warmth,
clarity, a promising…loving

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oooooo this is so very passionate, you are all heart indeed JL~

Glorious poetry from beginning to end.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2012-08-07 10:06 PM

Blues...
If I grin any larger my cheeks will burst.
Thank you for your very sweet reply.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2012-08-09 03:33 PM

quote:
Verse by verse
in my spirit
is a living treasure
which is
your song, your living,

Truly beautifully expressed emotions.

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2012-08-09 03:45 PM

Thank you, Margherita!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2012-08-09 04:08 PM

What a beautiful tribute...
just lovely! You are as inspiring
as you ever were...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

13 posted 2012-08-09 04:12 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine!
I appreciate your kind words.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2012-08-10 02:13 PM

This is absolutely stunning! If the one who inspired this wonderful romantic write isn't smiling ear to ear, there's something wrong! LOL

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

15 posted 2012-08-10 11:26 PM

Thank you, sweet Texas Gal!
You always reply with such encouragement.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

16 posted 2012-08-11 12:59 PM

Romantic... So easy to imagine these words put to a voice.... Beautiful

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

17 posted 2012-08-11 12:28 PM

Thank you for your very kind words, muted.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

18 posted 2012-08-11 02:46 PM

JL, what a wonderfully romantic poem! quite special I believe.

Lori

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