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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-08-03 10:14 PM



Forsaken


If I were to forsake my love
and then ask for her forgiveness
would she forgive me
or would she
forsake forgiveness.


JamesLee
02August
2012


    

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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
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1 posted 2012-08-04 12:02 PM


That's a hard question...each person is so different...I hope it works out the way you want it...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2012-08-04 06:32 PM


Ah, to forsake love is to forsake wisdom, and it leaves the door open to malice.  The question is, methinks, will she forsake love?
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2012-08-08 10:17 PM


Thank you Startime...Klassy that is something to think about...an interwoven experience...James
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