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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us my eyes are drawn to the evening stars cicadas execute magical symphonies I light candles setting a special mood they flicker back unto the starry night it's the end of the day and I am sated There's a far off place on my mind no one is there except you and I my eyes are drawn to the evening stars cicadas execute magical symphonies in the heavens' its your face I seek and when I see it I become weak ©August 2, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-03-2012 09:02 AM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand 'write!' ... fine imagery (both poetic and photographic). |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Much obliged, Bruce, I appreciate your nice comments. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Romance at its best...the vision and trip were perfect...I love it...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...how poignant night becomes when solitary is a soulmate's sigh. I can hear the cicadas, and see venus sailing with the moon in this one. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Karen, the mood was in me with this one. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, Karen (another Karen) "...how poignant night becomes when solitary is a soulmate's sigh." That in itself is a profound statement, and I thank you for it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
There is something special about this one my friend...you dance your heart to an exceptional beat. Lori  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Very pretty, JP, very pretty. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, it is special, Lori, thank you for seeing that. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your comments, Ms. E, thank you so much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...back to the top...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, James . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
A very pretty devotion, here Best, Amaryllis |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And I thank you very much, Amaryllis, for reading and commenting on it. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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